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Dark Poetry #1

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mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 1999-11-10 10:12 AM

do not weep,
for i am gone.
do not mourn,
my passing long.
do not shed your tears for me,
with the angels i will be.
do not be afraid to sleep,
my time with you will always keep.
do not ever hesitate,
to call on me at heavens gate.
do not dwell upon the past,
live every day like it's the last.
do not turn your head away,
from a friend who needs your help today.
do not forget to listen clear,
to what the wind blows to your ear.
do not cast away the spirit,
listen close and you will hear it.
for it is my voice upon the wind,
my life with you will never end.

me

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

1 posted 1999-11-10 03:28 PM

Very thought provoking. Mojar.

Is there more in there?

DB

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Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an Earthbound misfit...
P. Floyd

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

2 posted 1999-11-10 11:39 PM

i deal with death a lot in my profession, paramedicine, and it is more of a observation that i see or interpret.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-11-11 08:26 AM

to call on me at Heavens Gate...great work

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-11-12 03:53 AM

I like this one, mojar. No one dies so long as they still live in the heart.

Michael

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

5 posted 1999-11-14 02:14 PM

I like this very much. It encompasses a lot of my own life death philosophy.

Nice work

-RS

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