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JD
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since 1999-11-05
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0 posted 1999-11-09 10:04 PM


Some think the world of love if full of little cute things
and for some there are
but in the World I live in being the world of the dead
it is almost the complete opposite
it is rather dark not lite
black not white
Twisted not Strate
but still ........
in all this theres still love
a deffent kind of love but still love
its more of a love for the dead
not the liveing
for the liveing bother us
but I and my dead love
still seem to find happyness
in this twisted world of Love......

writen for Jessica Lynne Sousa My Dead Love
By JD







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Every thing Dies

© Copyright 1999 JD - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-10 04:51 AM


Enjoyed this.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-10 02:29 PM


Watcher's right. It is nice.

Everything dies, but sometimes they won't lie down.

DB

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Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an Earthbound misfit...
P. Floyd

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-11-11 08:21 AM




Liked very much JD

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Blue Eyed Wanderer
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 84
Rhode Island, US
4 posted 1999-11-11 11:10 AM


This one got me thinking over here Me likes baby. I love you.
~Jess~

Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
5 posted 1999-11-11 03:29 PM


Interesting perception, J.D. It is a twisted world and the living do have a way of always bothering us, don't they. Welcome to the Dark room.


Michael

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