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FreeByrd
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0 posted 1999-11-09 03:23 PM


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FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

1 posted 1999-11-09 03:24 PM





Enraptured, by your gaze
lips that need not move
a language never spoken
… they beckon me

Primordial sensation

Salacious ecstasy

Paroxysmal

Our venery

When they change from green to blue

… for me

-RS

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There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief
- Hendrix




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Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
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By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-09 04:38 PM


You're a bit on the looney side, eh Byrd?
That's okay you should fit right in.
I like your wildness. Looking forward to reading more.

DB

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September 30, 1659. I, poor, miserable Robinson Crusoe, being shipwrecked, during a dreadful storm in the offing, came ashore on this dismal unfortunate island, which I called "the Island of Despair," all the rest of the ship's company being drowned, and myself almost dead.
----Robinson Crusoe----
==Daniel DeFoe==

JennyLee
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3 posted 1999-11-09 05:54 PM


LOL...what a brillant piece here Freebyrd
You show much creativity


Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael
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4 posted 1999-11-09 08:54 PM


Yeah, D.B., I wonder who let this Byrd out of the cage? Indeed, you fit right in here.
Personally, I hate when green turns to blue - and it always does eventually, doesn't it?
Good job,

Michael

Watcher666
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5 posted 1999-11-10 04:48 AM


Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

FreeByrd
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6 posted 1999-11-10 03:22 PM


ThanX for stopping by. Always enjoy the comments.

Hope you like the visuals added today.

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Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
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By a big lake
7 posted 1999-11-10 05:00 PM


Absolutely, nice dreamscape snapshot. Movement and stillness bound.

DB

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Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an Earthbound misfit...
P. Floyd

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
8 posted 1999-11-11 08:13 AM



Awesome R.
Love the new graphic!! Added alot to your words!

Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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