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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-07 05:55 PM



Some demon from ancient mythology,
Has come forth from a past time,
And consumed my soul,
His demeanor was sublime.

Suspended between two worlds,
Unable to pass through the gates,
Into heaven or hell or another sphere,
I am alone, soulless, so I wait.

Wait for my own eternity,
To come forth and claim me,
A realease from this subexistance,
Nothing but darkness I see.

Suspended between these planes,
I look back on my life,
No one mourned me, no one even knew,
I was now the imp's wife.

No mourners at my funeral,
No friends or family missing me,
All the love I'd given,
Has turned on me.

Raped by the imp,
With the heat from the fires of hell,
Is there never to be a sanctuary for me,
A place where peace does dwell?

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-11-07 08:11 PM


I hear all the thoughts and souls screaming. I am not one to really judge this kind of work Sister. I am not a fantisy writer nor am I overly into fantasy books. I have enjoyed the ones I have read mind you but not really my thing.
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-11-07 08:15 PM


Jenny clapping Daughter of Mystery!!
Unable to pass through the gates...
really a Gothic like treasure.

Jenny


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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-11-07 08:20 PM


Not really my thing either, just experimenting Marilyn.
Jenny Lee thanks again, glad you saw something in my scrawlings

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


For_Never
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America
4 posted 1999-11-08 12:55 PM


This is my type of work.... fantasy is my sustance.... a world of magick, so that the world may be changed..

it is good to be able to excape this world timme and again..

EAB


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For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent...

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-11-08 12:59 PM


Coming from you I take that as a huge compliment, thanks Edward

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

6 posted 1999-11-08 07:58 AM


Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
7 posted 1999-11-08 05:13 PM


Dang, I can't believe you're here in Dark, but posting fantasy, too....this is too much. Great job, Isis.


Michael

DreadedOne
Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51
Odessa, TX
8 posted 1999-11-08 06:25 PM


Very cool poem. If you ever find that Sanctuary, give me a hint how to get there.

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D.O.

Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting.
Dreams are reachible, love completing.



suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
9 posted 1999-11-08 06:55 PM


I love fantasy writings just to bad I cant seem to write them at all and probably couldnt do as good as thee if I tried. GREAT WORK

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life is short kill quick

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
10 posted 1999-11-08 11:49 PM


Thanks guys!
Michael I've surprised you, haven't I? LOL
I surprised myself too!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
11 posted 1999-11-09 05:06 PM


I'm late to the party but I have to say, you have the dark touch, love.

I am smiling,
You are stunning,

DB

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
12 posted 1999-11-09 05:36 PM


Thanks DB! But is it a gift to have the dark touch or a plague upon the soul?

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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