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Shasta Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24st augustine florida |
I Miss you Too many days have gone by Without the utter of 'I Love You" Tell me were Did our flame go? I want to know. How do I hold in the pain I feel? I want to make you see the love I hold inside for you. Touch me once more The way you use to I miss the passion we Use to have. If I had the chance to Hold you close once More, I would not tell That I miss you, Or That I can't go on Without you…no I would say, "I Love You. ------------------ You onnly have one llife, Think about it |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Tell me where did our flame go? The everpresent Q... I knew you were out there somewhere! Nice piece. DB ------------------ Right out of the grave they came and made small talk. --"In Honor of Their Daughter"-- ==John Mosher== |
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MacBeth Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 14 |
not fair, is it? good poem tho  |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed the read....nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very sad piece, Shasta. I can relate completely to this one. Michael |
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