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Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake

0 posted 1999-11-05 07:04 PM


Sweet, how sweet
The sounds unbound
From dusty page and genius found

Joy and sorrow
Lusting for life
Compete for the chance to ease my strife

Paper flat notes
Spring to life with thunder
Fill the hall with awe and wonder

And soothes me
When it's soft and gentle
I'm caused to wax all sentimental

My Music dances
In every line
Drugging me like blood red wine

I need a glass
Play on my friends
Let Music's story never end

DB

[This message has been edited by Deep Blue Me (edited 11-06-1999).]

[This message has been edited by Deep Blue Me (edited 11-10-1999).]

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JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-05 07:52 PM


DB..you make me smile
This is just what I needed after alot of
emotions today. Are you sure you are of this time and space??

I am caused to wax all sentimental
Reading the words of Poets so inspires you!!

JL

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-11-05 10:29 PM


Indeed, Deep Blue, music to my ears. I find music quite inspirational and often use it to set my moods when I write. Wonderful little melody you have here.

Michael

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
3 posted 1999-11-06 12:09 PM


There are three things I couldn't live without (Besides food and water) they are 1: my boyfriend 2: Poetry and 3: Music. Nice poem, I really like it.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-06 04:32 AM


Liked this very much!!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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