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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Caring is obsolete Intimacy is sex Love is a social disease Sex is it T & A Levi's 501 blues Feelings crushed to powder And swept under the carpet Do it Passionate Id No Ego, no teaching Superego has taken a ride Role models are sex symbols Nice smile, nice hair, Oh hey... She's scratching her head, Must be dandruff Rebuttal of the physical The ultimate prejudice Look good--Feel good Look good--Looked over Look good--Felt up--No choice Look different--All alone Act yourself, nix general approval But does it matter? Who cares anyway? DB |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
**Scratches head full of black and pink hair** I really like this one....I can truly relate. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
The words hear are not obsolete..."looked good...looked over" Well done DB so true  ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Yeah, superego's taking one hell of a ride too....'99 Harley, leather jacket, whew! Can't touch this!...sorry, my imagine got the best of me here with my little 2-stroke Honda and 80's lookin' Members Only jacket....no wonder I'm bummin', I look like crap. Great poem, Deep Blue, love the Freudian referances. I'd point out you my favorite line but this one packed so many solid punches I'd be hard pressed to choose. Michael |
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