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Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake

0 posted 1999-11-04 03:05 PM


Scenes pastoral
Crimes immoral
Hearty repasts
Poor man fasts
Always dark
Single bulb stark
Dream on
Scream on
Many needs
Grow like weeds
Outstrip cash
Conscience smash
Caught so dead
Now prison fed


DB

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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-05 11:58 AM


Good read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-11-05 01:02 PM


Hearty repasts...dream on scream on... LOL... I loved it.


Mahalo,
jld

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-11-05 04:34 PM


Your style rocks. I can't read your work without my mind starting to churn in all different directions(could be good for my own writings)...Another great work here.


Michael

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