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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
So how was I to know She would become extreme I still love her even though My indecision makes me scream Sometimes she's a stranger Sometimes she's a wife I feel like I'm in danger When I think she's in my life There's times I leave her clinging And next she gets surprised At night my ears are ringing As I lay hypnotized I'm staring at my ceiling I'm staring at my walls She needed something to help the healing So she stole my b**** I've got a knot way down inside I'm still afraid to give It's there I go to run and hide Can I really live? With her as lover, friend and wife I'm not sure what I'll be It's all internal, mental strife When will I be free? D.B. ------------------ Mirror, mirror, I confess I can't escape this, emptiness No more reason to pretend Here comes that same old feelin' again ----------------Snowblind ................STYX [This message has been edited by D.B. Whyte (edited 11-03-1999).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Let your words set you free DB...it has been my only saving Grace  JL ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done....enjoyed this one much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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spoongirl28 Junior Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 27FWB, FL USA |
Wow DB....these are my thoughts froma male point of view! Wish we could actually speak to each other of our pain, for I understand it! Well written and wonderfully expressed! ------------------ Spoongirl28 The time to live is now...... |
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