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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-11-02 07:48 PM


~~Ok, lets judt pretend the stupid HTML thing worked the way I wanted~~




I am too ugly for






I
am too ugly for



This worlD that cast me aside



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DO you know what it feels like



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To Not be able to trust?



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To think all intentions are false?




 


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Don’t apologize-



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I don’t dEserve apologies



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JuSt please let me be



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Every time I walk into a classroom



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I feel I am intRuding



Continue with your Vanity



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I sEe I can only interrupt your bliss




 


I can’t reallY belong



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ON this earth where only the



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BeaUtiful are fit to smile




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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


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D.B. Whyte
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-11-03 07:05 AM


I got it, and I love it. How creatively cool!

In the soul lies the only true beauty, SD, and you wear the crown.

D.B.

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Inevitably asking the impossible, "Grasp the imponderable, love the unloveable, be true to your betrayers."

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-11-03 07:57 AM


Excellent Dear girl..you amaze me all the time. I totally love the concept and the message!! You are rocking

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-03 12:13 PM


Excellent!!!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
4 posted 1999-11-04 09:40 PM


Umm I know its probably not about this BUT IM SORRY.
BTW A NICE POEM though it makes me fear im sorry.

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life is short kill quick

Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
5 posted 1999-11-05 09:40 PM


Thank you everyone, for replies.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



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