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D.B. Whyte
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

0 posted 1999-11-02 12:58 PM


My friend Mort came calling again
I invited him in with a knowing grin
And we both sat down on the couch

I asked him if he wanted a beer
He responded with his usual leer
And so I got us some cold ones

All through the night we sat and stared
acting as if we didn't care
Then we flipped to PBS

When the anthem was through
The screen turned vivid blue
And we just watched in silence

And with an impatient sigh he turned to me
I popped him where his eye used to be
And we began again the fight

The cold spread from his bony touch
I said to him, "I don't know much,
but I won't die tonight."

Quick as a wink he backed away
I'd avoided judgment day
But he'd be back again tomorrow...


© Copyright 1999 D.B. Whyte - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-02 02:32 PM


***Giggles*** DB,second stanza made me laugh so hard. No one ever offers me beer like that I knew it was going to be interesting reading your work LoL !!

BTW...glad you avoided judgement day

Jenny

D.B. Whyte
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA
2 posted 1999-11-03 12:24 PM


It's not a morlywort but it was fun to write.
Glad you liked it.

D.B.

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Mirror, mirror, I confess
I can't escape this, emptiness
No more reason to pretend
Here comes that same old feelin' again
----------------Snowblind
................STYX

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-04 02:01 AM


Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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