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spoongirl28
Junior Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 27
FWB, FL USA

0 posted 1999-11-01 10:05 PM


Wandering, searching, hunting.....
For the one thing I can't find
Looking in peoples' faces
Slowly losing my mind.

Trying out different hobbies
But nothing seems to work
Just a glimpse is all I'm asking
But I don't know where it lurks.

Every day is like the last
The routine goes on and on
Impossible it seems to me
But for it I truly long

Wandering, searching, hunting....
For with it would come bliss
The only thing I'm looking for
Is peaceful happiness.


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JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-01 11:58 PM


I found this very absorbing Spoon. The last stanza did me in!! May we both find peaceful happiness

Jenny

For_Never
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America
2 posted 1999-11-02 12:07 PM


Very urgent sense I am picking out of this.
Urgent, yet prolonged. It touches upon that rare vision that unfortunatly all but a few seem to get but a passing glance upon. I, to wish that you find your happiness, and seize upon it as a rapor in the hunt. Aim not for contentment, for it doesn't exist.
Very compelling.

Sorry for rambling.

Edward A. Beerman

" the forest is burning, and we are the flame. Who knows why we are so...but forever we will...Of this we know." EAB, 'Life;'

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-11-04 02:55 PM


Good job Spoongirl, it's what we all search for I think.

Michael

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-05 11:38 AM


Enjoyed this much.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
5 posted 1999-11-05 12:15 PM


Hey Spoon,
Don't give up the search...
There's so much for you to share

Enjoying,
DB

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The moon was bright overhead when I reembarked in the pinnace to return to my ship. A chill night breeze came whispering down from the depths of the valley, and suddenly the place was full of ghosts,-shadows of men alive and dead,- my own among them.
========Mutiny on the Bounty====
========Nordhoff and Hall====

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