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wolfie97
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since 1999-10-18
Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-11-01 08:20 PM



Good night, I welcome thee.
The darkness lets me truely see.
My light inside
My warmth beside.
The one true love
That rises me above
All of this chaotic torment
That my day has sent.

Tonight I let myselfe go.
Through with putting on a show.
I take off my mask of happiness
And let my evil repulsivness
Show through my eyes.
Listen to stories no one buyes,
Just sitting quietly
My mind trying to flee.
But now, I let them know
Just what I think of their show.

Do your math, choose your path,
Watch yourself or feel my wrath.
I've come to you, this is hard.
I'll begin with no words bared.
Tell me the truth now, fast,
Is it the same story as the last?
I believed you then, but how?
As I stand here now,
with you in bed with him.
The chances look really slim
That I can believe
While you deceive.

Quiet you are now in bed
As a gun is pointed to your head.
Any last requests for you two?
Soon now, the reaper is due.
I ask why should I spare your life
When you are sleeping with my wife?
Still there is no reply,
Guess they just wanted to die.
I cocked the pistol,
My mind was full,
Of anger and confusion.
Long I lived in dillusion.

But then, his face turned red,
He just wet his own bed.
I broke the silence with laughter,
And had to leave them soon after.
Left them to live with life.
By the way, he can keep my ex-wife
Her mouth, her payments, her car.
I'll just sit in the bar
And laugh to myself outloud.
Forgetting the words she vowed.
A funny point in life,
And why I won't have another wife!

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

[This message has been edited by wolfie97 (edited 11-02-1999).]

[This message has been edited by wolfie97 (edited 11-02-1999).]

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JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-01 10:02 PM


Wow, I wouldn't want to be at the end of a real gun you are pointing... LoL...Your words here are just as powerful.

Jenny Lee

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-05 11:34 AM


Enjoyed this much! Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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