Death- Ceasation or Continuation of Pain

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Dark Poetry #1

Death- Ceasation or Continuation of Pain

suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-11-01 06:38 PM

The body old and fragile
dies and turns blue as the sky.

You say since they're dead
They feel no pain only happiness.
But how do you know this?
How can you infer this?
For how many times have you died?

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life is short kill quick

wolfie97
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since 1999-10-18

Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

1 posted 1999-11-01 07:29 PM

nice, I feel the same way, should we just go on what others believe or that thing they call faith? Or maybe, just maybe we can think for ourselves once. Truthfully, we only know what death is like once in our life. This poem really got me thinking!

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-11-01 07:53 PM

I liked this one much Tom. I think we just want to believe suffering is over- it gives us peace.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-11-01 09:30 PM

I am certain Tom,that the writer's block is fading fast....

.....I infer,that this is
a good slice of Soul

I know, this soul I bear...has died and been reborn many times.

Jenny Lee

suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

4 posted 1999-11-01 09:35 PM

thanks all for your words and yes jenny th block is dissipating

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life is short kill quick

handbagsatfiftypaces
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since 1999-11-02

Posts 12

5 posted 1999-11-02 07:54 AM

death scares the ship out of me. i think its over when the musics over

russelle
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since 1999-11-02

Posts 21
Chicago, Il. USA

6 posted 1999-11-02 11:07 PM

frightning, reminds me of hamlet to sleep perchance to dream. What does happen when we die?

D.B. Whyte
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since 1999-10-27

Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

7 posted 1999-11-03 07:16 AM

Have you ever felt the torment of your soul?
I believe the anguish can still exist even after the physical pain has subsided in death. Has anyone felt it in a room, or the boneyard? The soul is all that's left. I've been in agony w/o being in body pain.

D.B.

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

8 posted 1999-11-04 10:03 AM

Thought provoking piece.Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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