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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 1999-10-30 02:31 PM


Something strange,
yet oddly familiar
Black clouds rolling high,
covering up the clear blue sky
Nothing said,
only a deep sorrow hidden inside
Intoxicated by realization
The war has longsince past
but with all battles,
I suffered greatly
My flesh still numb from the pain
My heart still distant and untrusting
Walking lost,
with no destination
With nothing left,
all I have is myself
For I can never hide,
from the war raging inside

© Copyright 1999 Morgana - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-30 04:14 PM


This hits close to home......sometimes we don't even have ourselves though.

Good poem

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-31 07:55 AM


For I can never hide,
from the war raging inside...
So good DE..


Jenny

D.B. Whyte
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA
3 posted 1999-10-31 09:34 AM


Even when it's over, it's never over.


D.B.

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-03 12:24 PM


Dark and painful,the wars of the heart.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
5 posted 1999-11-04 03:11 PM


Indeed, everyday is one on the battlefront. I can surely empathize withthis one. Good work.


Michael

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