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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
I'll never see her face again Perfect, so desired of men So far gone, so far gone Sighs slip past my parted lips A harbor releasing sailing ships Into an ocean of deep blues Breathe the fumes or dance on air Open a vein, see crimson there My heart's on a dusty shelf Weep so long my eyes won't tear The night she left was crisp and clear My soul-flame has gone out 10/29/99 Just some more rubble. Thanks for listening. ------------------ He soils the sanctity of that which is perfect and wonders why he is shunned by all. [This message has been edited by D.B. Whyte (edited 10-29-1999).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sometimes we've been hurt so much we simply forget how to cry in the physical sense. Yourds have picked up where the tears left off. Good job. ------------------ Michael Anderson And after-drunkeness of soul Succeeds the glory of the bowl - An idle longing night and day To dream my very life away EAP |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I loved this madly!! My soul flame has gone out too. Jenny |
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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
Thanks JL and M, I'm glad you're out there D.B. ------------------ Mirror, mirror, I confess I can't escape this, emptiness No more reason to pretend Here comes that same old feelin' again ----------------Snowblind ................STYX |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
'Weep so long my eye's won't tesr"......loved that line!Well done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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