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kari
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since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

0 posted 1999-10-28 07:23 PM


You're all wrapped up in yourself.
Active voices place their one independant gift in life and you destroy it.
Go stray off to the luxuries of the world and lose yourself.
You don't resemble anyone but yourself as I watch you drown in your struggles.
I hope you choke on your pride and swallow al of your shame.
I want shame to pour into your pores and seal you in an envelope of pain.
I want shame to quilt you in every thread and squeeze you in my tiny hand.
Be Ashamed.

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D.B. Whyte
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-10-28 09:25 PM


"seal you in an envelope of pain"
ROCK ON!!!!

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Pull out the stop plugs,
Drain all the waste,
No sign of yesterday.
Men at Work
"Cargo"

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-29 06:34 AM


I want Shame to pour into your pores and
seal you in an envelope of pain. Keep 'em coming

Jenny

Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
3 posted 1999-10-29 12:32 PM


Very good, I like the imagery.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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