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For_Never
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 1999-10-27 11:55 PM


Thusly;
and thus it was anew,
how one person begins again,
darkness falls, and lifts again,
one more thing off to fend,
Flowers in the unfold,
however the darkness does doth grow
and in future time recant,
in all the loneliness we spent,
and in time we can't forget,
shadow harken at the weakest hint,
emotion off once more they went,
However we repent...
We know not that which is untold
in the corner we grow bold,
and when time is ever spent,
where shall we be sent?
~fin~

© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-10-28 05:29 AM


Wonderful work here, For_Never. Some deep thoughts...that's for sure. Pull up a chair and visit a while, welcome to the Dark Forum.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-28 08:26 AM


For_Never.Welcome, I like your style

Jenny

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-29 01:55 AM


Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

D.B. Whyte
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA
4 posted 1999-10-29 05:45 PM


Very original, sounding aged and ageless.

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Doing what can't be done is the glory of living.
---Samuel C. Armstrong



D.B. Whyte
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA
5 posted 1999-10-29 05:46 PM


Very original, sounding aged and ageless.

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Doing what can't be done is the glory of living.
---Samuel C. Armstrong



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