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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Im tired of the lies, the self indulgence. No one lies to make others happy. We lie for ourselves, our benefits. We lie so we are liked come the morrow. Im tired of the lies. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow,my dear one....this will scream it's truth forever! Jenny Lee  |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
A true but sad comment on life.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Wow, i too believe that this poem is really heartfelt and meaningful...and true as well, excellent job..  *************************** starboards ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
me too |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
YOU LOVE ME YOU REALLY LOVE ME LOL .thanks for the great little replys i really appriciate them especially on this piece. ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
And the truth shall se you free...very well done. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Nice one Tom. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
Short, to the point, and sweeter than honey is the truth your serving. I'll put it in my tea. D.B./slomovingvehicle |
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