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BoyToy
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
everett, wa, usa

0 posted 1999-10-25 11:30 PM


Sitting here alone in the dark,
wondering why I must be apart.
My feelings so frail, my secrets so deep,
My emotions so wrapped in self grief.

I yearn for my desires,
my longing so deep,
never to be realized,
for fear of being a freak.

What is my future?
I ponder my ways.
I see myself strangled,
my fantasies lost in a daze.

I ask myself why,
I wish not the answer,
I know the solutions are to scary,
and I will be consumed by my anger.

Best left alone for now, better for all
forever I will be empty,
and resistant,
to my fantasy's call

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A dark, black past is my most valued possession...D. Mustaine

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Tisha
Junior Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 12
Weedsport, NY
1 posted 1999-10-25 11:43 PM


Your feelings and fantasies should never be surpressed. Your talent and love of life will lead you to freedom. Remember how much I love you.
Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 1999-10-26 03:34 AM


Wow...all I can say...except, never give up your dreams, your passions, or the last can of beer!
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-26 09:12 AM


Fantasy is the way of the world.Too dull without them.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-10-26 11:19 AM


I echo all those posts before me. WOW!

Jenny

D.B. Whyte
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA
5 posted 1999-10-27 10:34 PM


You have some very pleasurable pain there. I can only encourage you to continue expressing the depths of your descent. Through revelation comes relief.
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