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starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-10-21 09:59 AM


You think I'm over-reacting
and that my sadness is not true
You claim that you are happy
but part of me still lives in you

You won't notice it at first
but, don't worry, you soon will
One night it will hit you like a 1000 bricks
and you'll realize that you love me still

But when that night comes
and you'll realize I that was your dream come true
I won't be there, you see
because by that time I'll be over you

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[This message has been edited by starboards (edited 10-21-1999).]

[This message has been edited by starboards (edited 10-21-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-21 10:07 AM


Way to go! Liked this much!!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
2 posted 1999-10-21 12:50 PM


You tell 'em starboards. Let him know that you will get over the pain you have and find something better.

I have enjoyed reading everything you have written.....hope to see more soon.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
3 posted 1999-10-21 06:22 PM


How true is this.great poem

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life is short kill quick

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
4 posted 1999-10-21 06:57 PM


Thanks all of you who have written replies to many of my poems i have summited...at times it was better than therapy...poems are a way of expressing my emotions and you guys have let me do so, thanks again!
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-10-21 08:20 PM


LOVED THIS!!

Jenny

Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
6 posted 1999-10-21 10:25 PM


Very good. Brings a smile to my face, for in ways, it relates to my current situation.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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