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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
A woman hurt me long ago and I closed the windows. A woman hurt me a while later and I shut the blinds. A woman hurt me later again and I shut the door. Another woman hurt me again and I locked the door. Another woman hurt me yet again and I lost the keys. Another woman hurt me recently and I wont let anyone in again. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Devorone, how sad. I can't tell you to give love another chance, because I honestly don't know what I would do if I was put in your shoes. what a sad poem. Very touching. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So Sad.But when the right woman comes along she'll have her own key to open the locks. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Very Sad,good poem tho. I MUST agree w/ Watcher666 The right woman will have the key!!  Blessings, Jenny  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Know the feeling well, Deverone. Better nail them windows shut too. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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