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Dark Poetry #1

Forever Alone

wolfie97
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-10-20 07:14 PM

As I sit here wondering
How it could have been,
I catch myself thinking
Of you again.

I can't help it, I'm still in love
Without you here I'm forever alone
I wish you were here to rise above
But, no, it is etched in stone.

'Till death do us part.
That is the burning phrase.
You are lost in my heart,
In the center of the Maze.

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-20 08:24 PM

I like this a lot...but once again, I think it was ended prematurely...

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-10-21 12:30 PM

This is really very well written but,I must agree with Sys. It could go another stanza or two.

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-21 08:39 AM

Well done ,but once again I agree with the Ladies on this.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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