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Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-19 04:57 PM

Shivering, shaking
Pretending and faking
Crumbling, breaking
Lucidity runs away

On the floor
Beaten, sore
I want more
I am the Whore today

Wretched, abused
Bewildered, confused
Easily amused
And always wondering why

With no love and no hope
And a mouthful of soap
With a noose about my throat
I, the Whore, deserve to die

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-19 06:37 PM

Dark and chilling!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 1999-10-19 08:53 PM

This one surely touches a nerve, some cringing thoughts here...very nice.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

Midniteyez
Junior Member

since 1999-10-15

Posts 20
Soldotna, Alaska USA

3 posted 1999-10-19 10:03 PM

To this one, I relate.
You put well into words that which I have felt before in my life.
I liked this poem much.

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

4 posted 1999-10-19 10:15 PM

I swear Ill end her.BTW GOOD WRITE AND READ DEAR FRIEND.

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life is short kill quick

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

5 posted 1999-10-19 11:32 PM

This one definatly hit home...i can relate perfectly with this poem...great work!!

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

6 posted 1999-10-20 03:35 PM

Tom.....perhaps I should clarify that this piece is about me....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

7 posted 1999-10-20 04:57 PM

I don't know how I missed this one Amy!!!!

Sorry!!
Excellent as always! Dark Dark Dark!!!!!!

Jenny

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

8 posted 1999-10-20 06:17 PM

Very dark indeed. Your talent in all areas of writing are truly impressive Sys!!
I enjoyed the read......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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