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wolfie97
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since 1999-10-18
Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-10-18 06:47 PM


So dark and dreary
Is my past,
So how is this (tell me)
Supposed to last.

You give me a sweet promise
That I should only believe,
But is it just an evil kiss
That only you conceive.

You tell me just to trust,
When all I get are lies.
Is it truth or stories of lust,
That everyone else just buyes?

Every time I give it time,
In the end I am hurt.
So, I will stick to tequila & lime.
Now at last, I just wanna flirt.

For now I am molded
Into just a player.
Through with being scolded.
Call me, "***** Slayer".

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Joke for jokesters no offense intended
Garrett 'sneaky' Gall


[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 10-25-1999).]

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Shasta
Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24
st augustine florida
1 posted 1999-10-18 07:57 PM


very differrant


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You onnly have one llife, Think about it

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 1999-10-18 08:35 PM


No...i like this poem...but are you trying to hide the hurt inside...it sounds just like me...keep writin'!


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-10-19 11:14 AM


I enjoyed your work here,very different and
and easy to read !!

Jenny

wolfie97
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA
4 posted 1999-10-25 07:33 PM


thank you for your replies. Just a warning to anyone offended by this, it is only a joke. I hope to read so many more here, and write as well, thanks again!

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

D.B. Whyte
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA
5 posted 1999-10-29 05:22 PM


Kinda street/Kinda locked in
Nice insight.

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He soils the sanctity of all that is perfect and wonders why he is shunned by all.


wolfie97
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA
6 posted 1999-10-31 01:40 PM


great!! funny as hell, a sence of humor is going to save us all! love ya, kissy82
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