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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-18 05:36 PM


Heart pumping vile liquid.
Black crimson cascades through the veins.
Filling every artery with darkness.
Giving life to the most sadistic beings.
Animating the purest evil.
Giving life to the human race.

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life is short kill quick


[This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-18-1999).]

[This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-18-1999).]

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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-18 05:45 PM


Interesting...not sure I quite understand though....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-11-13 12:03 PM


How about "Black?"

DB

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And in the darkest depths of Mordor,
I met a girl so fair
But Gollum and the Evil One
Crept up and slipped away with her.
===Zep===

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-11-13 01:28 PM


Animated Evil would be good.
I like it


Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
4 posted 1999-11-13 09:32 PM


Amy this poem is about Humans and how we are the most evil beings on this earth, for various and obvious reasons
btw people thanks for the help

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life is short kill quick

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-11-13 11:58 PM


Human blood or Sadistic Blood maybe.
Liked this one a lot SD

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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