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OBLIVION
Junior Member
since 1999-10-04
Posts 21


0 posted 1999-10-18 12:15 PM


Rush to edges
Precarious wavering
Breath suspended
Waiting for the plunge
Sleep now
Or forever forget yourself
Beneath childish rage
And incessant rambling
Piece together our life
Or be as the lost piece
Like a hole in the heart
Of a better time.
Do not await your test
Challenge yourself.

© Copyright 1999 OBLIVION - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-18 12:23 PM


Mostly, we are suppressed by those we allow sway in our lives. We tend to repress ourselves nicely as well.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-18 12:20 PM


Bravo Oblivion !

Jenny

Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
3 posted 1999-10-18 05:51 PM


It made me think...nice work.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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