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starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-10-17 11:34 PM


Maybe you didn't see me
or you chose to ignore
Someone you once knew
and someone you used to adore

Maybe you loved her
or maybe you just need someone
to help you w/your problems
that you cant overcome

Maybe I'll get over you
or maybe I'll linger
in the short moments
that we shared together

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-18 12:28 PM


Truly like the message in this one!!

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-19 03:35 AM


Good one.Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
3 posted 1999-10-21 12:47 PM


Very pretty. I've felt this before.
the hurt will pass with time.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



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