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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-10-17 11:31 PM


I'm invisible
so no one can see me
I'm invisible
so that no one can hurt me
I think I'll stay invisible for awhile

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-18 12:29 PM


Me too !

Short and to the point!! Says volumes!!

Jenny

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-19 03:37 AM


A lot said in so few lines. Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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