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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-10-17 11:29 PM


Self-worth
hope
all gone...
this razor's my only friend
a friend who will stop the pain
it's funny how no one noticed
my problems, the signs
but still I reached out...

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-19 03:31 AM


Keep reaching....there's a hand at the other end if you reach far enough.Your pain and confusion are well felt in this one.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Deverone
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
2 posted 1999-10-19 08:08 AM


This was very touching and sad. It made me want to reach out a hand to you.

You will always have helping hands here.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-10-19 09:25 AM


This is well written and very sad!!

Jenny

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