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jac
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since 1999-10-17
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0 posted 1999-10-17 09:52 PM


Filter out this poisonous plague that has made its home in my body.

Give me nourishment,love.

Let our tongues meet each others with all the friendly juices that flow from our mouthes.

Enlighten me with the knowledge you've gained from the passionate novels that arouse your senses.

Please, love, feed me the milk. The icy, cold milk that allows my body to feel your touch again.

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jac

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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-19 03:29 AM


Nicely done! Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-19 09:23 AM


Well Done..very good read!!

Jenny

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