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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-10-17 12:48 PM


Seeing them together
as happy as can be
totally helpless
as i try so hard to speak

Utterly disoriented
when I heard you say
that you've always loved her
and was hoped to marry her someday

Ceasing to breathe
because I was the only one for you
but I now see it in your eyes
that we will forever be through

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-17 11:55 AM


Sadness overwhelms me with your words..thanks for sharing!

Jenny

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-10-17 01:16 PM


How sad......

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
3 posted 1999-10-17 02:44 PM


Very very sad. I wish you luck in finding lasting love.

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life is short kill quick

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-19 03:21 AM


So Sad.....

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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