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Dark Poetry #1

Hunter

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-16 09:38 PM

Cat hunts mouse.
Cat catches mouse.
Cat imagines rodent between teeth.
Cat imagines taste of morsel.
Cat imagines too much.
Mouse gets away.

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life is short kill quick

[This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-16-1999).]

Shasta
Junior Member

since 1999-10-16

Posts 24
st augustine florida

1 posted 1999-10-16 10:31 PM

It made me think

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You onnly have one llife, Think about it

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-16 11:26 PM

Indeed, curiosity kills the cat.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Midniteyez
Junior Member

since 1999-10-15

Posts 20
Soldotna, Alaska USA

3 posted 1999-10-16 11:42 PM

Short. To the point. Yep 'tis good.

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

4 posted 1999-10-17 02:33 PM

I love this poem, even though it is short it has lots of meaning to it...i feel like i'm the cat sometimes and life is the mouse...keep writing!

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-10-19 03:20 AM

Nicely done.Reminds to do somethings then think about them before it passes me by.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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