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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-10-14 12:23 PM


I see what comes
The cold breath
A future bereft
Of heat light,love

Tommorow is cold
A lifeless husk
Only good for fear
spreading its chill

Can a void-cold-dark
hold onto loves light
only tommorow will tell
Only the lovers know

As my fire dims
Its heat dies
I fear for you
In the future you lie

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-14 07:42 PM


A lifeless husk....I could feel chills when I read this!!
Good work !

Jenny

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-19 03:03 AM


Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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