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starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-10-14 09:48 AM


I cant forget
the time in your eyes
the time we kissed
the time we said goodbye

Even if it was just seconds
or minutes at the most
the memory is now
like an unwanted ghost

A ghost that still loves you
a ghost that still cares
even if you cant see it
the ghost is always there

waiting in the shadows
hoping to be found
the ghost is my heart
that you've stomped to the ground


[This message has been edited by starboards (edited 10-21-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-14 10:00 AM


This as if it came from my own soul!!!
Welcome!

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-14 10:03 AM


So sad! Well done verse.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-10-19 09:03 PM


Very well done,
Love the theme....

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?




Midniteyez
Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 20
Soldotna, Alaska USA
4 posted 1999-10-19 10:01 PM


Too true.
Very well done

Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
5 posted 1999-10-21 12:43 PM


Very beautiful....and heartfelt.

Your words seem to be a reflection of my feelings and pain also. My heart gooes out to yours.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



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