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Rain Maker |
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cstamand Junior Member
since 1999-10-10
Posts 13Huntsville, AL, US |
RAIN MAKER Look out and see the cloudy day, and look at all the rain. For I cried and wept all day, look at the clear drops of rain, how could it be that from my suffering and pain it made a beauty that I can’t even explain? While I’m suffering and in pain God made soothing water to comfort my aching pain. My tears roll - down on my cheek and it shines God rubs my chick and feels the pain from me. He goes to the heavens and makes the clouds representing the bruising and the stabbing wounds from inside of me. He takes my wounds from inside of me, and then shows them to everyone that looks at the rain. He feels my pain and drops down on his knees and cries for me, showing the hurt and the pain from inside of me. He lets the world know he is crying and aching for me. He makes a rain - storm and hopes it will comfort and sooth me. ------------------ Crystal St. Amand |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
All I can say is WOW. This gave me a cold chill seeing how closely in tune you are towards your pain. Very nice work. Really enjoyed it. ------------------ Deverone |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow Crystal very very good descriptive verse! Well Done. Jenny  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I really like this one alot Crystal, the emotion is pure, the poem has direction. Very well done. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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