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JoKeR
New Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 8
Lake Wales Florida

0 posted 1999-10-13 10:57 PM


Hearing those three little words gracefully slip through your lips,
with just a whisper you speak to every part of my soul.
My heart aches to be with you,
my arms long to hold you,
and my lips so badly want to taste yours.
For so long I fought these feelings,
but I can no longer fight them,
I love you,
and my love grows stronger everyday.
The amazing power you have over me,
You turn the night into day,
water into wine.
I don’t want to live without you,
I want to spend forever with you in true happiness.
Once I was lost,
with no dreams,
no love,
then you came along and brought me into pure heaven,
and now I’m found.
You’re perfect,
your smile,
your touch,
I can’t help but love you.
You are everything,
Now, and always.

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Is it really better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all? Is it really worth all the pain that comes with a dying love?

© Copyright 1999 JoKeR - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-13 11:11 PM


You have the Soul of a True Romantic Heart!

Enjoyed very much!

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-14 09:31 AM


Lovely soul searching verse!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Tammy
Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90

3 posted 1999-10-14 06:01 PM


Joker,
This was simply a beautiful poem...
It's nice too see a man with a romantic side.
Keep up the great work



T.

Shasta
Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24
st augustine florida
4 posted 1999-10-16 10:35 PM


You have a sensul soul

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You onnly have one llife, Think about it

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