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cstamand Junior Member
since 1999-10-10
Posts 13Huntsville, AL, US |
Crow In the black dark night, there is a scary crow He looks down with disappointment in his eyes, For he sees you live in sin. His black eyes look at you in disgrace. You better watch out, you better run. He’s about to kill a hundred make that a hundred and one. He speeds for the kill, rips out an eye and throws it down the hill. He comes back, and cracks the brain. He speeds back up and rips the heart, And you laugh before you go insane. You look back up, and see your racing heartbeat You fall back down and scream in pain. ------------------ Crystal St. Amand |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Wow Crystal A Killer Crow!!  I find your topics so varied and interesting. Jenny  [This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-13-1999).] |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
It read so fast and powerful to me I had to read it a few more times. Good job. Really enjoyed it. ------------------ Deverone |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much! Excellent verse! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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