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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Hide my heart It betrays me It shows me It controls me Hide it deep force it down no secrets Now will it tell It hides secrets It is undone someone opened it Now it can hold no-one I am an amatuer in a game With no rules playing on in vain Hearts and diamonds Posies and pears My hearts secret I can find you there. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Hide my  it betrays me!! Like very much... Jenny  |
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JoKeR New Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 8Lake Wales Florida |
Huh...are we the same person?? this poem is me...every last bit of it...a heart that controls you, even when you don't want to do what it is telling you, you end up falling in love and being hurt time and time again...good piece ------------------ Is it really better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all? Is it really worth all the pain that comes with a dying love? |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Indeed, the fisrt two line are a poem in themselves. Well done. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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