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J_Jeter2
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 2
Longwood Fl, 32779

0 posted 1999-10-13 09:21 AM


Isn't it quite sad,
how quickly the heart breaks
One persons change of heart
is all it really takes
In an unthought instant
your life can change its song
And you're left to wonder
what exactly you did wrong
Once my heart lived
and now it has died
What can you do
when there are no tears left to cry
When everything you have is lost
and it changes who you are
How can you fight, a pain so bad
that it leaves a you with a terrible scar
I used to know happiness
it was apart of who I was and still want to be
But it's hard to smile
when the one you loved,no longer cares
So my advice to all the people
who know my sorrow
If you think today is bad
wait until tomorrow.

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JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-13 09:23 AM


AMEN!!!!
powerful words here!!


Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-13 09:24 AM


Heartfelt verse.Hoping tomorrow is better for you

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

3 posted 1999-10-13 10:54 AM


The great belief is undeniable reality
What comes tomorrow is only a product of today

Entropy is the key

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
4 posted 1999-12-20 10:48 AM


Hey..well you've always responded to my poems so now i'm responding to yours, and once again i love this poem, although i've already read it...

ashley

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