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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-11 10:34 PM


A life long tragedy
I live with nothing
I will die with nothing

Eternally damned and loathed
Nobody loves me
Everyone kills me

Timeless hurt and suffering
Is this a joke
Am I the cosmic joke??

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life is short kill quick

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-11 11:56 PM


I know it seems like it now, but noone is ever truly unloved. The hurt will pass in time.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

2 posted 1999-10-12 06:39 AM


So sad! But it will change...if you let it.

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Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the heart



JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-10-12 08:39 AM


While I love the work..I am concerned about your feelings...let the pain go....then you will re'c the love you need!!

Blessings Jenny

suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
4 posted 1999-10-12 08:48 PM


Thx for the votes of confidence i hope i find it someday soon before i do something insane

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life is short kill quick

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-10-13 01:00 AM


Just wanted to tell you;You need not feel
alone!

Jenny



Deverone
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
6 posted 1999-10-13 01:45 AM


As time moves the heart will learn to heal and you will become stronger.

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Deverone

Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
7 posted 1999-11-16 02:56 PM


Tom,
Having been pretty far gone myself (a long time ago in a galaxy far,far away) I empathize with the lost extreme nature of these feelings. I hope it has gotten better for you as it has for me. Keep writing. It was my pathway to some lower levels of peace in my soul.

DB

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The little girl on the plane, who turned her doll's head around to look at me...
------Franny & Zooey------
===J.D. Salinger===

suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
8 posted 1999-11-16 10:32 PM


Oh yes it has gotten much better )very much)
and thanks for the little star wars quote
great movies great quote

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life is short kill quick

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