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Life as I see it. |
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cstamand Junior Member
since 1999-10-10
Posts 13Huntsville, AL, US |
Life as I see it. Life is an existence one has to bear, even though it’s not a pleasant one it still lives there. Even though you might scream in pain, and wish it wasn't there, it lives on even though there’s hurting going on. It still lives on consuming love, trust, and honesty it’s as if you’re in a burning flame, and you can't seem to control your brain. Yet life is an existence one doesn't have to bear if you look upon it in a horrifying scare. You gasp for air, yet you can not breathe. The smoke has consumed your lungs and your needs, and you feel you can't go on. You steal a knife that’s sharp and gray, you look upon it as if it’s the only way. Yet you didn't hold back the agony and the tears, you scream like hell inside your brain, and slice your vein. Yet this time you didn't hold back the pain, you cried before you went insane and cried once more to prove your pain. ------------------ Crystal St. Amand |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
So true and honest are your words!! Welcome!! Jenny  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
cstamand, I have read most everything you have posted in this forum and see a recurring theme in all of them. It's obvious you harbor a lot of pain and ill feeling toward life in general, but your writings to me are vague in who/what your anger is aimed at. I see the words "I, me, my" over and over but never seem to understand what is causing you such pain. I would be much more apt to respond to your writings if they just were a little clearer. I know you are a teenager, and I wouldn't want to be one in this day and age, that is the best sentiment I can shre with you right now. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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