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cstamand
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since 1999-10-10
Posts 13
Huntsville, AL, US

0 posted 1999-10-11 01:18 PM


My frozen heart

My heart is frozen and living but it can’t feel. It’s forgotten pain it’s forgotten how it’s suppose to feel. It knows nothing but pain so it thinks it’s normal to be frozen and feel nothing but bitter coldness of the heart acting pain. To my heart it’s not pain to my heart its life to pump my freezing cold blood to my veins. The heart takes the pain and turns it into freezing cold bloody pain. It takes it from my heart to my veins and all the way up to my brain. Controlling me to where I can’t see past the confusion and pain. I know pain but my heart doesn’t My heart wasn’t meant for so mush suffering and pain. A heart is meant to pump hot blood and to have a racing heart and to feel the happiness excitement and joy. I feel nothing but excruciating pain. I have freezing cold blood and if I was to put hot blood in me to help the freezing cold blood it would burn sting and scissile draining me of any blood and ruing my veins. And I would lie motionless in my char and my heart would pump and find nothings there. My heart would realize pain is turned inside out and before my heart beat one last beat it realized a heart aching pain.


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Crystal St. Amand

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JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-12 09:32 AM


Pain is an horrible emotion...but it is one we must endure. For how will we know true
happiness w/out suffering through this dark emotion!! Really good descriptions here!

Jenny

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