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cstamand
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since 1999-10-10
Posts 13
Huntsville, AL, US

0 posted 1999-10-11 01:11 PM


Felling so alone

Lying in my bed I hear something shatter and I feel everything fall I think a thousand thoughts I hear a thousand screams. My throat begins to naught and I begin to lean falling from my bed still in the future of this deadly nightmare dream. This girl cries but no cares to look and see she’s feeling so alone and cries for eternity.




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Crystal St. Amand

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JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-17 04:02 PM


You are very descriptive in this one dear!! I like.

Jenny

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