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Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 513


0 posted 1999-10-11 04:21 AM


What more can I tell you
Why do you torture me?
We're done we're though
So don't dare threaten me

My hand you did force
To tell you that lie
There nothing left to say
I tried to tell you goodbye

You wouldn't take my word
Vengeance you did cry
Now I've become bored
And I'm daring you to try

Come near me or mine
Protect them I will
Touch one hair one their heads
I know the urge to kill

Don't think I can't do it
I assure you I can
From Hell's fiery pit
I am who I am

Now stop the intimidation
And just leave me be
I want nothing more of your fabrication
Just stay away from me!



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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


© Copyright 1999 Dragoness - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-11 05:08 AM


As I said before, I get first dibs on whatever is left after his chicken blood bath and is locked in a room with the pack.

Well written again, sister mine.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-12 08:42 AM


Dragoness...this is awesome I could feel every word!!!

Jenny

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

3 posted 1999-10-14 12:58 PM


an enjoyable night in death blood a small shot of gin

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

Iloveit
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
4 posted 1999-10-14 01:28 PM


great poem, I had never come to dark passions, I thought it wasn't for me, lol, but now that I am here and read some of the stuff, this is me, I have a lot of darkness inside of me, really liked this poem, it talks to me.....
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
5 posted 1999-10-14 02:35 PM


Dragoness, great poem. It pretty much says everything I feel about one person.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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