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cstamand
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since 1999-10-10
Posts 13
Huntsville, AL, US

0 posted 1999-10-10 11:24 PM


Reflections

As I look through the bloody mirror, I see me.
I was once clean and pure,
But that has all been replaced by a dark bloody puddle of blood,
Which has left me bleeding and crying on the floor.

I try to move, but I cannot.
My sticky wet blood is making me slip,
I cannot scream for my lungs have collapsed in fear.

I close my eyes and open them,
Only to find now I’m in a dark Black Sea.
The salt water is stinging my cold dark blooded wounds.

I cry in pain and look behind me only to see a shark racing at me.
He bites my arm and jerks it from me.
I am feeling cold and numb, only to find
There’re two more fighting for me.

A wave then pushed me into a thorny tree.
I look down only to see my flesh is rotting all over me.
Now, I can see there’s no life for me.

I then set myself free,
Only to be lost in the cold dark sea
Not even knowing if anybody’s missing me!

Written by Crystal St. Amand



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Crystal St. Amand

© Copyright 1999 cstamand - All Rights Reserved
Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
1 posted 1999-11-06 04:11 PM


This is a heightened sense of dream state.
Well worth a look-see.

DB

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-06 04:14 PM


Liked this much!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-11-06 09:00 PM


Hey Crystal...about time your writing again.
Heartbreakingly beautiful...
Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 1999-11-08 04:46 PM


You have been missed by this one, that's for sure Crystal. Glad to see you posting again.

Michael

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