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Dark Poetry #1

Mistake

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-10-09 01:51 AM

Us meeting was a huge mistake,
But you can’t blame me,
My error was easy to make.

You are one of those people,
The kind whom you can’t have anything with but lust,
And the kind which you can’t trust.

I regret I ever met you,
But hey, you live and you learn
And that’s what I intend to do.

I’m going to forget you,
Because this whole thing was just a mistake,
A mistake which many make.

As time goes by,
So does everything else.
Good bye, and hope to see you never.
Nothing is forever, and neither is the memory of you.
You were just a mistake,
Which I learned from, and this error I will never again make.

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

1 posted 1999-10-09 02:58 AM

Liked this one a lot! Very well said!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-10-09 02:40 PM

I have lived this mistake !!
Welcome Olga ! Great little read.
I really love the last line. How True

OBLIVION
Junior Member

since 1999-10-04

Posts 21

3 posted 1999-10-09 02:43 PM

Mistakes are more priceless than the happier moments in times like these. This was a great poem, though more of a mission statement than poetry.

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

4 posted 1999-10-09 08:15 PM

Thanx, mistakes are made so that they hopefully wont be made again.

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