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Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 513


0 posted 1999-10-08 11:42 PM


How can I to you explain?
Whats going on in my heart and mind
Surely you see it's plain
I must be cruel to be kind

The words I said I meant
You think there twisted and bent
I'm sorry for all your pain
And hope you do find love again

Confusion, Fear all in my head
Perhaps I would be better off dead
Cold desolate life
Filled with anguish and strife

The words you sent missed their mark
I'm truly at home alone in the dark
For although you think you know me
It's I who truly know You you see

I might be a witch fat old bore
But you came calling me
And I'll even the score

And why were hear listen to this
Fierce like a rattler Yes I do hiss
Don't threaten my family or friends
I'll tear you to pieces in the end

I don't play games intentionally
Mixed up, dazed bemused that’s me
But if you want to start
It’s your life who will depart.



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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


© Copyright 1999 Dragoness - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-09 12:34 PM


This is chilling and well done Dragoness!
It is haunting.

Jenny

DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-10-09 01:28 AM


Knowing the circumstances behind this piece, sister of my heart, has me agreeing with you and I get first dibs on whatever chewed up remains are left when the pack is finished with him.

Verse is very well done.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 1999-10-10 04:39 AM


Ditto dream on both counts, and add that I'm glad you're not mad at me!
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