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A Sirens Unrequited Love.......
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A Sirens Unrequited Love....... |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
The moon is dark, the night is long... Can you hear the siren's song? She sings a song we long to hear... She sings of love, and yet we fear... She sings of love so sweet and pure She sings to the one that she adores But she sings in vain, for he cannot hear She sings in pain, for he is not near For he was taken from her long long ago And yet she still can't let him go... Ripped from her breast, like a newborn babe Beatened and shackled, made into a slave Slave to a woman cruel and cold... Slave to a woman without any soul But our siren sings on long into the night In hopes, that her lover, one day still might Find his way back to her......... |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Welcome Baby Girl  I do like this Siren's Song so very much *wink" I never feel alone when you dear child, are around. Always Family !! Jinkers |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This piece likes me much. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Beautiful poem! Well done! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Great poem,keep up the good work. --------------------------------------------- What you resist, you become. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How beautiful, Tammy. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
nice very nice I like this piece allot keep it up ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
Thank you all for your positive feed back on this poem... Tammy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Tammy, I loved this very much Well Done ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
She sings a song we long to hear... She sings of love and yet we fear... Her song rings true o'er dale and hill... It sweetly whispers peace, child, still... Masterful words from you,T Mahalo and aloha, DB |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I love reading your Siren again...and you never thought aye??  Jinkers ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
Thank you Dark Angel and Deep Blue Me your positive feed back is greatly appreciated.. And a special thanks to you Jinker's since your the one who insisted that I finish it and post it. |
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