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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-08 07:28 PM


Eyes dark and cold
upon me they stare
watching my evey move
laughing at my stupidity
hating my abnormal ways
upon me they watch
smirking at my choiceskilling all good esteem
hurting what is left
upon me they leer
damning my every word
stealing all self pride
destroying all I am
These eyes are those of mine peers.

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life is short kill quick

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-08 08:31 PM


damning my every word....I know these feelings well...

You are unique,and have a style all your own.
Be happy and dance to your own music!!

Jenny

suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
2 posted 1999-10-08 08:49 PM


I love my style and thx for saying its unique
you seem to be a cool person by btw thx again jen


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life is short kill quick

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